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题目要点: 要点很清楚,共三个 读书意义活动计划和个人愿望或感受,注意不要遗漏要点,每个要点下面有几个小要点,写作时要注意总分结构的使用。

  •   六. 活动介绍类

      1.  2012年4月23日,我市"周恩来读书节"开幕了。我们班将组织"与好书为友,以读书为乐"的主题活动。请根据以下提示,用英语写一段话,词数在80~l00之间,内容必须包括表格中提示的要点:

      读书意义   活动计划 个人愿望或感受

      了解世界 找些好书 ……

      带来快乐 用好时间 

      培养习惯 做好笔记   

      注意:1.文中不得出现出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

            2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

      参考词汇:develop 培养

      On April 23, 2012, Zhou Enlai Reading Festival in our city opened. Our class will organize a reading activity -Be Friends with Good Books and Take Delight in Reading. I think________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

      解析: 这是一篇介绍读书活动的文章,要求考生根据表格信息写话,必须涵盖所有信息。

      一、题目要点: 要点很清楚,共三个 读书意义活动计划和个人愿望或感受,注意不要遗漏要点,每个要点下面有几个小要点,写作时要注意总分结构的使用。

      二、写作提纲: 可以按照三个要点的顺序来写。先写读书的意义,然后写活动计划,最后写自己的个人愿望和感受。

      三、语言组织:介绍"读书节"可能用到的短语和句型:it's+ adj+ for sb to do sth, help sb do, learn about,bring sb sth, plan to do, as...as possible, improve oneself

      四、过渡衔接:读书意义和读书计划中,各包括并列的几点内容,可以用序数词来介绍,三个要点之间,也需要一些过渡性的句子,让文章的衔接更加流畅。

       一类文

      On April 23, 2012, Zhou Enlai Reading Festival in our city opened. Our class will organize a reading activity -Be Friends with Good Books and Take Delight in Reading. I think it is important for us to read books because they can help us learn more about the world, bring us enjoyment and develop good habits. For this reading activities, we have made lots of plans. First, we are going to have more helpful books. Good books are like good friends. Second, we plan to make full use of our time to read books as many as possible. Third, we are going to take notes after reading. I hope we can read more books and improve ourselves a lot from this activities.

      2 假如上周日你参加了长江社区的Yard Sale活动。请给你们学校校刊上的English Club栏目写一篇关于此次活动的介绍。

      要点如下:

      1有200多人参加了此次活动;

      2有的人出售旧物如:衣服、玩具、自行车等;

      3有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、书签等;

      4还有的人交换旧书;

      5请写一至两点你对此次活动的看法。

      注意:

      1词数60-80 ,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;

      2文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。不要逐条翻译。

      参考词汇:Changjiang Community  n .长江社区 exchange  v. 交换  used  adj旧的

      解析: 这是一篇活动介绍类文章。要求学生根据所给提纲提示介绍本次活动的情况,并谈谈对这次活动的看法。

      一、题目要点:提纲式呈现写作教材,所以要点一目了然,即所给的五个要点,写作过程中都应涵盖,不可遗漏。

      二、写作提纲:可以按照提纲顺序来写,要写出活动的主要内容和对活动的看法。

      三、语言组织:在五个要点的基础上,进行适当扩展,注意句式的变化和语法的正确,如主动句和被动句的使用,定语从句和宾语从句的使用,可能用到的短语有:more than, take part in, such as, so...that, in one's opinion, not only... but also

      四、过渡衔接:要点与要点之间要使用一些关联词连接起来,使文章层次清楚,表达连贯。

                                          一类文

      It was fine last Sunday. I went to Changjiang Community to join the Yard Sale. More than 200 people took part in the activity.

      Some people sold used things such as bikes, toys, and clothes. Others sold cakes, cards and bookmarks which they had made by themselves. Used books could be exchanged in the yard, too. It was so interesting that I enjoyed myself there.

      In my opinion, it was a meaningful activity. In this way we can not only make full use of used things, but also protect our environment.

      3"地球一小时(Earth Hour)"活动是由WWF(世界自然基金会)发起的全球最大的环保活动,在今年的"地球一小时"活动中,你所在的和平社区举行了"爱护地球,保护环境"的活动,请你根据下列提示介绍一下该活动,并谈谈你对活动的看法

      1. 在那天8:30---9:30 熄灯一小时

      2. 很多人做出一个环保改变,例如多乘公共交通,不乱扔垃圾

      3. 活动号召人们养成节约用电的好习惯

      4. 对本次活动的看法或感想

      一、题目要点:提纲形式呈现写作材料,要点很清楚,即给出的四点,不要遗漏。

      二、写作提纲:开头已经给出,接下来按照给出的要点来写即可,可以适当调整一下顺序,让意思更连贯。

      三、语言组织:"熄灯一小时"很多考生会想到turn off for one hour,但是turn off是短暂性动词,不能和一段时间连用,所以这里要用be off for an hour; call on sb to do sth 号召某人做某事

                                   一类文

         Last week, the activity "Love the Earth, Protect the Environment" was held in Heping Community.

      Lots of people took part in the activity. On that day, between 20:30and 21:30, all lights were off for one hour. Besides this, a lot of people made a decision to support the activity. Some people decided they would go to work or school by bus or subway. Some promised that they wouldn't throw litter anywhere.

      The aim of the activity is to call on people to save electricity and protect our earth as much as possible. In my opinion, this is a very meaningful activity. I hope more and more people can take part in it and made our earth clearer and nicer.

      

      4 今年我市深入开展了"学习雷锋精神,共创文明城区"的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天,你校组织志愿者去夕阳红敬老院开展"学雷锋,送温暖"活动。假如你是学生张华,请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友Ben,与他分享你的美好经历。(活动内容见下表)

      活动时间 3月5日

      活动地点 夕阳红敬老院(Xiyanghong Nursing Home)

      参加人员 学校志愿者(volunteer)

      活动形式

       1.送去鲜花和水果

      2.帮助打扫卫生

      3.陪老人聊天(chat with sb)、唱歌、跳舞

      4.送去美好祝愿

      5.……

      活动感想

       关爱(care for)老人(the elderly people),尊重(respect)老人

      要求:

      1.短文应包括 表中所有要点,可适当发挥;

      2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;

      3.文章不低于60词。开头、结尾已给出。

      Dear Ben,

      Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did in our school on 5th March.

      ______________________________________

      If you have the chance to come to China, I hope you can join us.

      Yours,

      Zhang Hua

      一、题目要点:以表格形式呈现所给材料,要介绍活动的时间,地点,参加人员,形式和感想, 其中形式和感想是写作重点,本文应以第一人称来写,需要用过去时态

      二、写作提纲:开头结尾已经给出,中间可以大致分为三个部分

                  1.introduce the people and place

                  2.introduce what we did there in detail

                  3.introduce what i think about the activities

      三、语言组织:可以参考的词汇bring some ...to,  do some cleaning, chat with, give our best wishes to, it's our duty to do sth

      四、过渡衔接:在叙述活动的内容时,可以加上一些连接词,例如then, after that, as soon as等让文章更紧凑流畅。

                                         一类文

      Dear Ben,

         Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.

         As soon as we got to Xiyanghong Nursing Home, People there gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. The elderly people were very excited.     

      When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness. But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.

      If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.

      Yours,

      Zhang Hua

      

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