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可以用一些表并列或递进的词把建议连接起来,增强文章的层次性和逻辑性,例如first, besides, also, last but not least等

  •   五.人际关系类

      1 英语课堂上,老师要求学生就"与人相处"的话题展开讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以"How to get on well with others"为题,写一篇英语短文。

       Suggestions: 1. Learn to share

                    2. Respect others

                    3.Communicate with each other

       My suggestion : ……

      人称: 第一人称

      内容: 第一部分: 开篇点题,作为中学生应该学习如何与人相处;

             第二部分:小组讨论的建议

             第三部分:我的建议

      语言组织:

      重点词组: learn to share; respect others; communicate with each other; in my opinion; be kind to

      重点句型:should do sth;  It's important to do sth;  We'd better do sth;  It's a good idea to do sth;  try to do sth

      As we all know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?

      First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it's important for us to communicate with each other. We can share happiness and sadness with our friends. What's more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.

      In my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. I am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others.

      2 在学习与生活中你一定帮助过他人。我校校服正在开展以"我助人,我快乐"为主题的征文活动,请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你助人的故事,让大家一起与你分享助人的快乐。

      一、题目要点

      1. 帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因

      2. 助人的具体过程(你是如何帮助他人的)

      3. 被助人的反映及你助人的感受。

      二、写作提纲

      时态: 一般过去时、一般现在时

      人称: 第一人称;第三人称

      内容:助人的故事及帮助人和被帮助人双方的感受

      三、语言组织

      重点词组: be good at; help with; ask sb for sth; give up; learn from; make great progress

      Everyone needs help and I've learned a lot from helping Mike.

      I was not good at math in the beginning. Months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math because he wanted to give it up after he failed some exams. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn't understand before. Every day I helped Mike go over what he had learnt, I also helped him with his homework. During the weekends, we did exercises together. With my help, Mike made great progress in math. Later he even enjoyed learning it.

      From this experience, not only did I help him out of his trouble, but I also improved my own math. I have realized that it does everyone good to help others. Helping others is helping ourselves.

      3假设你叫刘京,你在回复笔友Helen的e-mail。请你回答她的问题,针对她的问题谈谈你的看法,给她提几点建议。                    

      解析:

      这是一篇帮助朋友排忧解难的文章,主要内容涉及如何解决和父母之间的矛盾,这也是学生在日常生活中常遇到的问题,这类话题贴近学生实际,比较容易表达。此文的关键是要点要齐全,学生容易直接就写建议,而把来信中的Do you think I am right? 的回答漏掉。

      一、 题目要点

      1. 回答Helen的问题

      2. 谈谈你的看法

      3. 给Helen提几点建议

      二、 写作提纲

      时态: 一般现在时,一般将来时

      人称: 主要是第二人称

      内容:针对问题提出看法和建议

      三:语言组织

      重点词组:pay attention to; can be found; make a phone call; have a talk with; ask for; work hard on; no longer

      重点句型:I don't think; had better do; if 从句

      四, 过渡衔接

      可以用一些表并列或递进的词把建议连接起来,增强文章的层次性和逻辑性,例如first, besides, also, last but not least等

                                      一类文

      Hi! Helen,

         Glad to hear from you, but I'm afraid you are wrong.

         In my opinion, we students should pay attention to study. Mobile phones are not necessary for us. They're not like books and pens. You should understand your parents and do what they ask you to do first. Now public phones can be found everywhere. If you have to make a phone call, you may use them. You'd better have a talk with your parents and tell them you won't ask them for it any longer. Besides, work hard on your lessons and read more interesting books. Last but not least, you may also tell your problem to your teachers and friends if necessary. I'm sure they'll help you.

       If you have more questions, please ask me.

      Yours, Jing

      4 假设你是王威,你的朋友马华上周来信说,他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话,这使得他非常苦恼,不知道如何处理。请你给他写封回信,提出一些建议并帮助他解决问题。

      一、题目要点

      就朋友遇到的麻烦提出合理化的建议(不少于2条)

      二、写作提纲

      时态:一般现在时

      人称:第二人称为主

      内容:第一部分:开篇点题,你要给朋友提出几点建议

            第二部分:你对朋友提出的解决问题的具体建议

            第三部分:你对朋友的祝愿

      三、 语言组织

      重点词组:in trouble; talk with; heart to heart; try one's best to; after all; get on well with

      重点句型:It's + adj + to do sth;  you should

      Dear Ma Hua,

         I'm sorry to know that you're in trouble these days. I'm your friend and I can give you some advice to help you.

         First, you can find a chance after class to talk with him heart to heart. It's necessary to tell him that listening to the teacher carefully is very important so he can't talk to you in class. Then, you can ask him if he has some questions and needs your help. You should try your best to help him. After all, helping others is helping yourself.

         I hope my advice is useful and you can get along well with him.

                                                                       Yours

                                                                       Wang Wei

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