在写作时同学们要注意时态变化,按照问题的顺序,我们应使用一般现在时、过去时和将来时,可能用到的短语有:hear from, be OK with, be free, go to visit, hang out, look forward to等等。由于是写回信,一定注意开头和结尾要和对方有互动,如:Glad to hear from you. Please write to me soon. I hope you…等句子。
二、暑假计划类
1、你的笔友Sammy想了解你这两天的考试情况以及暑假安排。假定你是陈涛,请根据Sammy在电子邮件中的提问,给他写回信。字数在80字左右。
写作提纲:
第一步:How was your English exam?
第二步:How was everything yesterday?
第三步:What are you going to do during the summer vacation?
第四步:Are you ready for your new school life?
语言组织:
在写作时同学们要注意时态变化,按照问题的顺序,我们应使用一般现在时、过去时和将来时,可能用到的短语有:hear from, be OK with, be free, go to visit, hang out, look forward to等等。由于是写回信,一定注意开头和结尾要和对方有互动,如:Glad to hear from you. Please write to me soon. I hope you…等句子。
Dear Sammy,
Great to hear from you!
I am really satisfied with my English exam. It is English that I have always been good at as well as interested in. Generally speaking, I had a busy and tiring day yesterday but I was quite pleased with the support I received from my family. As for the summer vacation, I have quite a few plans. For example, I will go to visit my grandparents who looked after me for years. In addition, I am going on a trip to Sichuan, which is to my mind the most beautiful place. Most importantly, I can't wait to enjoy my new school life and meet new friends.
Hope you are well.
Chen Tao
2、今年的九月,你就要开始高中生活了,这个阶段是我们人生中的一个重要时期。在即将到来的暑假,为了更好地适应高中的学习生活,你打算做些什么?词数80左右。
写作提纲:
建议同学们描述两、三个暑假计划。既然是要为高中的学习生活做准备,大家可以从学习、锻炼身体等方面来着手叙述。
语言组织:
大家可以思考一下做哪些事情可以为高中的学习生活做好准备:review lessons, take exercise, preview the lessons in senior high school, read books等等。
过渡衔接:在谈论计划时,可以使用一些表示并列或者递进关系的词,如:first of all, what's more, in addition, on the other hand, besides等等。
I will enter senior high school in September. I therefore plan to do something useful during the summer vacation in order to help me adapt to my new school life.
First of all, I will spend almost a month reviewing what the teachers taught me in junior high school. In addition, I am going to take more exercise, which will help keep me physically strong. Most importantly, I will make myself well prepared by previewing the lessons in senior high school so that I can have a better understanding of them.
I do hope that I will live a wonderful life after implementing the above plans.
3、老师想了解同学们中考后打算做些什么,设计了一份调查问卷,以下是部分同学的假期计划。请你根据下面表格中的信息介绍你们三个人在假期中的打算,关于你的计划需要补充完整,内容可适当拓展。词数:80左右。
题目要点:
表格给了我们三个提示。即:what to do, where, why, 同学们要从这三个方面分别介绍三个人的暑假计划。
写作提纲:
针对这个题目建议大家在写作时做到首尾呼应,即开头和结尾都要点出"暑假计划"这一主题,中间部分分别描写三位同学各自的计划,信息点一定要齐全。
For the coming summer vacation, different students have different plans, all of which are interesting and meaningful.
Han Lin is going to do something for the neighbourhood because he is really fond of helping others. Wang Fang will do housework at home to please her often tired parents. I have always paid a good deal of attention to the environment, therefore, I am going to help to protect the environment by planting trees around our city. Moreover, I will appeal to more people to pay attention to the environment.
In short, although we have different kinds of plans, we all want to try our best to do something important.