中考/一模/二模试卷中考英语写作部分一些情况分享(3)

　　2.合理正确使用模版

　　一个模板原创者使用超高分

　　一个模板十几个人使用高分

　　一个模板几百个人使用平庸

　　模板句行云流水非模板句一天世界超低分

　　阅卷教师不会因为使用模版直接扣分，但是如果模版句子很流畅，非模版句子很差，我们可以以memorized answer/句子逻辑链接问题扣分

　　3.关注高分范文的共性

　　用词多样性an increasing number of students

　　避免单一句型

　　Ｉam Tony.I am aboy.Iam sixteen.X

　　连接词，逻辑清晰

　　For instance,therefore,besides,

　　亮点句型never fail to

　　4.一定要真正学会使用语法，避免输出时出错

• There are many things I hate to do, such as: reading boring books,go to bed  early and so on. I hate to read boring books because I thinkit spendme much time, so I don’t like to read them. I hate to go to bed early because I want to watch more TV, I   want play  more computer games.

　　5.语料库的事先储备

• Travelling can broaden my horizon, cultivate my interest, enrich my life.

•I would like to extend my deepest appreciation towards those who ……

•In order to improve my English , I read English newspapers, watch CCTV English channel and listen to some English songs.

 Some steps should be taken ….

 Sample Answer

The best teacher I know

During my English learning journey ,I have met a great many teachers. However, among them, Mr.Liu, in my mind , never fails to fascinate me. For instance, in order to help us memorize some words better, he often tells us a large number of funny stories about them. Besides ,when I feel sad or unhappy , he can be a very good listener to comfort me. Here I would like to express my deepest appreciation towards him. To sum up, Mr. Liu is the best teacher I Know. 

I am a member of reading club

When I was only a little girl, I took up reading as my hobby. Now I’m a member of a reading club. I’m very glad about it. All of the members share our own books with each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never get tired of reading. We enjoy ourselves all the time. In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. To be such a member makes my life more and more colourful. 

文章来源：昂立外语中高考英语专家吴争（由于写作部分一些情况比较敏感，本人的内容仅供参考，每年中考的阅卷情况也会有一些微调，本作者为此不承担因此发生的任何责任，谢谢理解）

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