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2014年上海中考英语范文
This Time Next Year
It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.
At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.
Life will be totally different, but I'm really looking forward to it.
【解析】
这篇作文需要涉及三个方面:变化、期望和自己的作为,因此文章中需要涵盖着三点。第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化,第二句是期望及第一个作为,紧接其后的是第二个作为,而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。
-- Coco 李文老师